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UPDATE: Better wording, better placement of bubbles, better overall, or so I hope. Going up on the site on Friday! 
Confused? Don't be. This is actually the 15th installment of Webcomics United, that you can also see here on dA. BTW, if you're asking yorself where's number 14, well...
I've decided to stop posting strips much ahead their actual publshing time on the site. Right now, strip 11's available for everyone who's never heard of it here on dA. While it sort of qualifies as "fan bonus" and also makes it easy to receive criticism before the thing is "on the go", it surely makes the actual thing a bit too... useless. Thus, I'll publish the strips only 3-4 days before the actual publishing time. I guess it's time enough to get any gross mistakes corrected, and still keeping up the pace of the comic as it is published.
This one is an exception, though, since it's an arc overture. Thus, it deserves some mention.
I try to change my style, but it's hard. Very hard. I'm also experimenting with some different takes and decided to make this black and white to save my time. Also, to put Zip through only one transformation process(more about this on strip 14) for now. Also, making more panels, bigger, is a totally different experience, the space seems gigantic compared to the little strips. The bigger problem here, though, is that I can't change it too much, since this is, theoretically, a well-stablished comic.
Anyway, here starts Zip's career as a filler. Also, Red Warrior: remember it? No? Here's a refreshment: [link] Thanks to Gryphon for letting me use the awesome design.
So, I have more stuff to do. College stuff. And the last request. And one last ad for PW. See you all, and thanks for coming.
Official Site: [link]
Previous: [link]
Next: [link]
Confused? Don't be. This is actually the 15th installment of Webcomics United, that you can also see here on dA. BTW, if you're asking yorself where's number 14, well...
I've decided to stop posting strips much ahead their actual publshing time on the site. Right now, strip 11's available for everyone who's never heard of it here on dA. While it sort of qualifies as "fan bonus" and also makes it easy to receive criticism before the thing is "on the go", it surely makes the actual thing a bit too... useless. Thus, I'll publish the strips only 3-4 days before the actual publishing time. I guess it's time enough to get any gross mistakes corrected, and still keeping up the pace of the comic as it is published.
This one is an exception, though, since it's an arc overture. Thus, it deserves some mention.
I try to change my style, but it's hard. Very hard. I'm also experimenting with some different takes and decided to make this black and white to save my time. Also, to put Zip through only one transformation process(more about this on strip 14) for now. Also, making more panels, bigger, is a totally different experience, the space seems gigantic compared to the little strips. The bigger problem here, though, is that I can't change it too much, since this is, theoretically, a well-stablished comic.
Anyway, here starts Zip's career as a filler. Also, Red Warrior: remember it? No? Here's a refreshment: [link] Thanks to Gryphon for letting me use the awesome design.
So, I have more stuff to do. College stuff. And the last request. And one last ad for PW. See you all, and thanks for coming.
Official Site: [link]
Previous: [link]
Next: [link]
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I just notice in panel three Mr.katt words are a little odd.
"do you have them in enough number?"
you might want to say "we" instead of "you" this makes it sound more like Mr.Katt was part of how many they pick up. In fact if you want to make him more self-center you could say "I"... but that doesn't work as well..
and you might want to reword the sentence a little like. "Do we have enough of them?"
though the sentence you did works, I did catch it on the fourth read, and my grammar still sucks
so I could be wrong....
"do you have them in enough number?"
you might want to say "we" instead of "you" this makes it sound more like Mr.Katt was part of how many they pick up. In fact if you want to make him more self-center you could say "I"... but that doesn't work as well..
and you might want to reword the sentence a little like. "Do we have enough of them?"
though the sentence you did works, I did catch it on the fourth read, and my grammar still sucks
so I could be wrong....